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Peppermint Roses by ~booklover323:iconbooklover323:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Human Nature > Open


I just don’t know how to say it

Longing only for her summer warmth
Outcast as I am
Violet eyes that cannot see
Eternal twilight’s worth

Hurting my thoughts
Every time I think of
Roses with a peppermint smell

I just don’t know how to say it
©2007-2009 ~booklover323
:iconbooklover323:

Author's Comments

OMG TWO POEMS WITHIN A SINGLE HOUR!

Shad's perspective again ^^;

Oh, and yes. This is written in the same style as my Nightslayer poem. =P Find the hidden message.
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Why Peppermint Roses?

Because.

I'm actually considering that as the official title of my Shad story. Not completely sure yet, but it's certainly the best one I've thought of so far. :D

It has a bit of an inside meaning, so you ppl probably won't understand it until I actually finish the story. ^^;

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~xfireandicex Dec 3, 2007, 1:27:48 PM
Aww thats beautiful! So concise but such a strong message! Kudos to you!

--
when it comes to sinners
you act like you're a pro
but you're just a beginner
i taught you everything
that you know

- breaking bones in abc order by dropout year
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~booklover323 Dec 3, 2007, 1:47:38 PM
Thanks! :D It's based on the main character of my Shad story...as are all of these =P He's a really shy boy who's afraid to tell his friend his true feelings about her. :hug:

Here's the link if you feel like reading >>> [link]

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1 :heart: t3h r4nd0mn3ss! :aww:
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~xfireandicex Dec 3, 2007, 2:08:20 PM
AWW!! I'll be sure to read it!!!

--
when it comes to sinners
you act like you're a pro
but you're just a beginner
i taught you everything
that you know

- breaking bones in abc order by dropout year
:iconbooklover323:
~booklover323 Dec 3, 2007, 2:09:52 PM
yay :clap:

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1 :heart: t3h r4nd0mn3ss! :aww:
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~GrimmSister Dec 4, 2007, 2:39:54 AM
UGH! Which one of those girls smells like peppermint and roses?! Two of the most GODAWFUL scents in the world, if you ask me!

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Why do you torture me so?


I tried to kill the pain, but only brought more. I lay dying, and I'm pouring crimson regret and betrayal--"Tourniquet" by Evanescence

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~booklover323 Dec 4, 2007, 5:03:55 AM
None of 'em =P

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1 :heart: t3h r4nd0mn3ss! :aww:
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~british-doll Dec 5, 2007, 3:22:05 AM
short but sweet, and for the world to identify with.
lovely work.

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"just another dead fag to you... but I'm glad you're on my side"

=RawEm0tion =Writers-Club ~The-Last-Stanza ~writeaway =PoetryPlease
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~booklover323 Dec 5, 2007, 5:54:27 AM
Thanks again! :bow:

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1 :heart: t3h r4nd0mn3ss! :aww:
:icongrimmsister:
~GrimmSister Dec 6, 2007, 3:58:59 AM
Then...ugh, my head hurts.

--
Why do you torture me so?


I tried to kill the pain, but only brought more. I lay dying, and I'm pouring crimson regret and betrayal--"Tourniquet" by Evanescence

Check out :icondroneguard:'s FREE icon pack!
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